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考研英语写作-如何写出高分句式?
来源: | 作者:源大海 | 发布时间: 2023-02-10 | 353 次浏览 | 分享到:

英语写作攻略

一、在名词后面添加短语作定语或者定语从句

使句子变长变难的方法之一就是给句子中的名词添加定语。而单纯的添加形容词作定语,一方面已经无法满足同学们对于整篇写作字数的要求,另一方面也无法满足阅卷老师对于学生写作语言多样性的要求,所以我们在给名词添加定语时,尽量添加稍长一点的短语作定语或者定语从句。具体应该如何操作呢,比如:2017年英语一

 

对于图片的描述,很多同学可能会简单地叙述为:A boy says“I have so many books.”, while another boy makes his mind to finish 20 books this year.这样的叙述虽然语法上是正确的,但是没办法让句子变得丰富,所以我们可以给本句话中的名词添加短语作定语。比如boy后面可以添加定语,定语的方向可以观察人物的状态,图片中男孩的状态是lying in a sofa lazily with a crossing legs.同理,另外一个男孩的状态就可以描述为who is so absorbed in his book.这样经过调整,本句就可以调整为: A boy lying in a sofa lazily with a crossing legs says“I have so many books.”, while another boy who is so absorbed in his book makes his mind to finish 20 books this year.最终,这个句子不管从字数上还是句式难度上,都更加出彩。

二、简单粗暴地使用固定句式

对于基础薄弱,句式多样性掌握不多的同学,可以直接使用这种方法,把自己写的简单句嵌套进给定的句式结构,简单粗暴。比如,还是2017年英语一,我们可以直接把我们刚刚写好的句子“A boy says"I have so many books.”, while another boy makes his mind to finish 20 books this year.”嵌套到这样的结构中:”as is vividly described in the picture,..., which captures my eyes”。最终,这个句子就变成了:As is vividly described in the picture, a boy lying in a sofa lazily with a crossing legs says“I have so many books.”, while another boy who is so absorbed in his book makes his mind to finish 20 books this year, which captures my eyes.经过调整,这个句子长达50个单词,一篇大作文,略微有一两个这种句式多样且字数长的句子加持,从完成度和得分上来说,对同学们来说应该会很容易做到。

但是,前提条件是,在同学们的大脑储备中已经有了不少这种成型的句式,这里列举了一些:

As is vividly described in the picture,..., which captures my eyes.It is depicted in the picture that.. . , which arouses my curiosity.Here comes the picture that ..., which is very interesting.

What makes me curious is that ...

 


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